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Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Creative Writing with Medical Terms (poem/song): The adventures of Hydrogen Walker, and his trip to the hospital


Thoughts running through my head are Malicious
Label me a pedestrian, my walk is suspicious
Swimming with fishes, but flying is faster
Tough Myocardium, means my heart is spectacular
You may say circulatory, but i say Cardiovascular

Like the system in your body, stop if you dare
Bought some Hydrogen shoes so i'm walking on air
Ask the Dermatologist about your skin not your hair

Wash real good, shampoo not soap
I read the Manual to be important like the pope
Too big to see an Asteroid? I need a Microscope
Way beyond hope, passing holes that are black
Common Neurologist would never consider that
But they are just weird like a Necrophiliac
Can you imagine that? Obviously i did
The Doctors analysis concluded you have Hepatitis
So you can try to fight it, but it'll hurt like Arthritis
The truth will come out in a Polygraph despite her
attempt to deceive that she wasn't a liar, beside her
Arachnophobia dreams, waking up beside a spider
The fire , or desire which ever burns like phosphorous
will possibly prosper and become tougher than a Rhinoceros
The pain gets intense, if you blink you might miss me
Pass out, receive Nephrectomy , later realize your missing a kidney
Blank out, wake up being Transported by a nurse named Sydney
In the hospital im Sitting in suspense , i'm bent, thinking of a way to finish this.
So lets go from the end to the beginning, Armageddon to Genesis

3 comments:

Duval said...

Since it is a poem, it does not need to follow grammar rules. At a quick glance this looks good. I will post your grade for this later today.

Duval said...

This is fantastic. I just finished grading it. Using the rubric, you made a 100. Well done!!!

Ms. O. said...

Wesley -

This is excellent. I'm really glad Mrs. Duval sent it to us so we could read it. I'm impressed at your ability to bring all those vocab words into something that rhymes and still makes sense!

Great work.